Almost perfect (Intro to Effective Writing)

For my writing effectively piece I decided to choose an assignment we did on May 9, 2010, which was paraphrasing and summarizing two different articles with a similar topic. when I received my work back, i was told that it was good and since summarizing and paraphrasing consists of rewording what you read into your own words i thought it would be a good idea to use this piece. I used various techniques here to reword what the readings were and i feel like I did very good revision when I finished.Paraphrasing was definitely harder than summarizing because of the way one has to structure sentences. It is clear that summarizing was where i did better however,I am very proud of my paraphrasing.